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CDSD - Broken Promises

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This story is based on Pacthesis' flash game Chrono Days Sim Date. A link to the game is in the description.

Theodore – or should I say Teddy – lurked around in the bushes like a boss. He felt like a ninja, skulking around, following the girl of his dreams. He wasn't following her because he was some creepy pervert (though everyone called him one; you get caught in the girl's locker room ONE TIME and you're branded for life!), but it was because he was concerned for her.

He started noticing the girl, Saige, had been traveling to the past a lot. I mean sure, visiting the past does sound pretty cool, but he would have thought being in a place with no internet would get boring after a while. Not only that, but she also noticed her daydreaming in class a lot with this goofy smile on her face. Plus, she seemed to be working at Reton Mall all the time, saving up to buy flowers in the past. There was no fooling Teddy: Saige was in love. With someone in the past, no less! He had to get to the bottom of it, so he stole his brother's third Time Jumper and darted off to the past.

Teddy had a hunch who it was too: Nathan. He knew that guy was trouble from the moment he saw him at the train station when dragging Saige home. There was no way she could like some guy from the past! She was supposed to like him! She promised him they would get married! Granted it was when they were little but that should count for something-!

Teddy got too wrapped up in his thoughts and smashed into a tree. "Mother f-" he grunted. He stopped himself, trying not to grab Saige's attention. If she found out he was stalking her he'd never hear the end of it.

"Did you hear that?" A voice asked. It was Saige.

"I didn't hear anything," another voice the blue-haired boy didn't recognize replied.

Teddy was alarmed at the sound of another person, but not for the reasons you think. He was actually surprised that this voice was feminine. He crept carefully in the tall grass and saw Saige sitting on a park bench. Next to her was not Nathan, but a girl. She was a brunette and wore a white dress, along with a pink ribbon on top of her head.

It was at that moment Teddy felt a huge wave of relief wash over him. Obviously the reason Saige was visiting the past so often was because she made a new friend in the past. She didn't have a boyfriend after all. Thank goodness…

Teddy was about to get up to leave when he heard the brown-haired girl say something that made stop dead in his tracks:

"Saige…your face. Bring it closer to mine."

Teddy covered his mouth to stop himself from shouting in total shock as Saige leaned in to kiss the other girl. Rather passionately, he might add. His brain couldn't process what he was seeing. Saige…Saige wouldn't swing that way would she!? N-No! No way!

Once the two girls strolled away, Teddy came out from the tall grass and used the Time Jumper to return to his time.

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The bell rang, ending what seemed like the longest school day of Teddy's life. While the other students of Reton High School were packing up their things, Teddy got out of his desk and marched up to Saige's desk to confront her. "Saige!"

Saige nearly jumped at Teddy's booming voice. She regained her composure and glared at the boy. "Geez, what? What do you want?"

"Is there anything you wanna talk about?"

Saige looked confused. "Uh, no…Should there be?"

"Oh, I dunno. Maybe the fact that, you know, you're a lesbian!"

Everyone in the classroom immediately stopped what they were doing and glanced wide-eyed over at the two. Saige, who was read in the face from both embarrassment and anger, grabbed Teddy by the arm and quickly dragged him out of the room and into a dark corner in the school.

"Ouch, you're hurting my arm!" Teddy whined.

"Shut up!" Saige hissed, letting go of his arm. "Did you HAVE to shout that out in front of everyone!?"

"Aha, so it's true-Oof!" Teddy shouted, only to be interrupted by Saige kicking him right in the nads.

"Quit being so loud!" Saige whispered loudly. "You couldn't have confronted me BEFORE school?"

"Well," Teddy said, pain detected in his voice. "I couldn't find you before school, plus I couldn't talk to you yesterday when I was following you and-"

"You WHAT!?" Saige shouted. She was now too angry to bother whether she began drawing in a crowd of students or not.

Teddy mentally slapped himself for letting that slip out. "Oh, uh, yeah, well…I-I was worried about you, s-so I stole another Time Jumper from my brother's lab to see what you were doing."

"What is wrong with you!? You're a stalker now? Christ…"

"So," Teddy spoke up before Saige could say anything else. "Who was that girl you were with?"

Saige sighed. "Well," she began, "if you MUST know, when I was in the past I stumbled upon this mansion, where I met this girl named Bianca. I started talking with her for the past few weeks, and she told she was a doll who was animated by a wizard who passed away a while ago."

A doll? Teddy thought to himself. Saige was in a relationship with a doll!? Was he really expected to believe that? That makes as much sense as a flying yellow creature that dates large muscular women!

Saige continued. "After a while, um…" Saige's face started turning crimson. "I dunno, things just sorta…happened. I didn't plan for it to get like this, but after a while I got a little, y'know…bi-curious, and uh…"  After struggling with words for a moment, her embarrassment returned to anger. "Hey, what am I doing? I don't have to explain my love life to you! Why do you care?"

"Because of our promise!" Teddy shouted without thinking. Realizing there was no turning back, he mustered up all his courage and said, "You promised we'd get married! You're supposed to be making out with toys; you're supposed to like ME!"

Saige was taken aback for a brief moment until she returned to her pissy mood. "First of all, we were kids! We say stupid stuff when we are kids. Plus, why would I want to marry someone like you?"

Teddy felt as if someone had just stabbed him in the heart. "Wh…What?"

"For starters, you're too much of a rebel. You go around using some fake name with dyed hair and you wear stupid looking sweaters over your school uniform. You've stolen from your own brother's lab twice now, and now suddenly you're a STALKER! It was just a stupid promise, and that's all it ever will be! So get that through your thick skull!"

Teddy stood there flabbergasted. Saige just rolled her eyes and stormed off, pushing aside the group of students who were eavesdropping on the two.

As the crowd began to disperse, the boy pulled himself out of his astonished state and called out to Saige. "Fine, who needs ya!? Have fun kissing your stupid doll you queer!" Teddy bolted off in the other direction, trying to conceal tears.

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Saige was preparing to enter the time hole and enter the past for good and be with Bianca when she was confronted by the Saki Dancer-loving-boy Cole.

"So Saige," said the boy with the prosthetic hands, "you're a lesbian now? I gotta say, that's pretty hot."

Saige put her hands on her hips. "Shut the hell up, Cole. How about I have sex with your great grandfather so you were never born?"

As Saige walked away, Cole shouted back: "Y-You wouldn't really do that, would you?...Saige?"
Remember kids: Doll or not, it's still gay. =P

Oh god...is this what it's come to? Me writing fan fictions on FLASH GAMES? Where did it all go wrong? xD I thought this would be funny but the only part of this I really like was the end. Nice knowing you Cole!

Play the game here: [link]

I really like *Pacthesis's work. She makes wonderful dating simulators and so many other awesome stuff. You should really check out her gallery.

It's kinda irritating to me Bianca is the least favorite character of everybody. Oh well. Homophobes gonna phobe. Landon got most of the votes because appeartly formerly fat guys are sexy. :I

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WHAT A GOOD STORY!!!!